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Abigail Oliver

The Ancient Race
The Ancient Race by @Cacopheny (Abigail Oliver)

Every good rp has some ancient civilization, right? ::chuckles:: Here's an interesting one, the Dajina. The name might change, but that's all I have for now... I like 'em ^^ Divided into castes depending on the number of horns they're born with. And their blood is blue, hence the blue veins, lips, and bluish skin.

That border-ish type stuff coming from the lower one's hand (two horned: either warrior or laboror class) is actually their language. It reads: "Kari escale a-hameka-yena day-dya-cha. Karow dyu-korishi o-dya-che. Karow va-kari dyu dya-kor." Or, in english: "I summon the power of the world. Make us safe. Protect us." I had fun with that, let me tell you!

And, of course, they're mine, language and all. I worked hard to come up with 'em. No stealing.

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Posted: Monday, 28 October, 2002 @ 02:59 PM

Ooooo, I like. :) I love the soft and rounded look of the blue coloring... talented in the shading department you are! :)

Sound like Yoda I do, yesss, hmmmm... ~grin~

The language is in such a beautiful script... I love the curves and way it all fits together. ^-^

Posted: Monday, 28 October, 2002 @ 06:26 PM

Oh! Oh! Prettiness! I love their expressions, for some reason. They look... I dunno... serene and aloof. And the hands. I love the hands, too. And the script! So flowing! Puts the characters of Daishan to shame, they do. ::starts pondering ways to give Daishan a cursive form::

I always say it, but I'll say it yet again anyway. Beautiful work as always, Gayle-chan. ^_^

Posted: Sunday, 01 December, 2002 @ 12:35 AM

good. I like this. When I had gotten around to thinking about the ancient race, I wanted them to be bipedal (hence all the biped anthros) and not too humanish... and I like those horns!! The vienyness makes them especially good. What rank or station is the creature above the warrior? The alphabet is amazing; you never cease to amaze me!! And, yes, all of the shading is extraordinary... but don't let slip too many secrets bout these guys... They remind me of Forerunner.... ooh, that would be cool, if the RPG was on a ring world.... coughs Anyway.... GOOD WORK AND KEEP IT UP!

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