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Fallen Angel

Purgatori - In Progress
Purgatori - In Progress by @Hack_Beta (Fallen Angel)

I'M NOT DEPRESSED ANYMORE!!! AND I CAN DRAW!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!! Artwork © Copyright 2002 Fallen Angel

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Posted: Thursday, 15 August, 2002 @ 02:16 AM

hello ^^ I'm glad you're not depressed anymore.

I like the way you discluded her facial features; but there are some itty bitty things you might think about improving on... -her neck seems a bit thick, remember that when someone is looking up, the neck tends to elongate and (thin) a bit. -her arms are a bit too short/small for what you set out with the head/upper torso -in relation to the head and the upper torso, the waist is a bit thick and short, from the pectoral muscles to the belly-button there should be a head length (likewise belly-button to groin); and the hips are also improperly proportioned -if someone were really to stand like that, they'd fall over. try positioning her legs a little further apart. -her breasts are 2 very different sizes

these are just a few areas to practice upon...you're already a good artist, and by studying things like anatomy you'll improve remarkably. good job ^__^

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