And Vince today... by @jessston (Jess Stoncius)
I finished this today. I think it looks a lot better than the previous version, personally...
He should probably shave better so his sideburns aren't ragged, but vain bugger that he is, he thinks if he doesn't leave them a bit scruffy, he'll look TOO good.
Wow! The improvements in your shading are subtle, but they really make a difference! Esepcially in the hair! That really turned out nice.
The sideburns are done well, but I think I like the length of them in the old version. Here, there seems to be a lot of space between where the 'burns end and his chin ends, and it looks odd, to me. Also, that far eye looks odd...like it's actually sticking out from the skull on the side. And lastly...ears don't have that much "empty" space under the "Y" structure...at least, my ears don't. They have kind of this ) or o-shaped thing kinda sticking out near the bottom, where you kind of have a 'point'...
Please don't think of me as critical. This has a TON of great craftsmanship in it, it's a VAST improvement over the old one (more structure, mainly!) and it's lookin' REALLY good! Those are all just somethings to keep in mind for next time to help you improve even more!
my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill