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X-Women Supreme
X-Women Supreme by @Jury (Jury Copeland)

This is a memorabilia shot of the X-Women Supreme.

(Drawn in traditional way: Ink and Pencils)

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Posted: Friday, 02 April, 2004 @ 12:38 PM

Lets see if I got this....Staddowcat, Rogue, Jean, Pylocke, Meggan--Domino, Boom Boom, Storm, Polaris---Jubilee, Ferral? Aurora? and Siryn.

....Pretty good. Like the coloring. And I admire the effort that went into putting EVERYONE into the same compostion. One quibble--and this may just be a matter of taste--the faces look too uniform. And the noses are tiny. Makes everyone look Asian. (Psylocke moreso, so good job on that.)

Jubilee's pose does look good though. So out of sync whith everyone else, yet so in-character. And the coloring......Again, wow. I salute you.

Posted: Monday, 05 April, 2004 @ 03:06 AM

not Ferral, that's Wolfsbane... and not Aurora, that's Rachel "Phoenix"... I actually made the hair white... (for the purpose of the story, I guess) ;)

anyway, thanks for the comment...

I'm really glad you appreciate them.

Posted: Thursday, 29 April, 2004 @ 05:03 AM

Really, a very masterful job of portraying the X-Women, if you ask me. I admire that you used mostly traditional, and the more practical, costumes from each woman's history.

Certainly a difficult feat to pull off, particularly with the level depth and spacial awareness you've protrayed here. I'm not sure where the lower half of Wolfsbane's body would be, as it seems to disappear behind Siryn. Additionally, there are some slight imperfections in sizes whe relative to one another, moreso in the foreground than the back. I gives an uncertainty of just who is further in the foreground and who is standing back a ways.

Nonetheless, this is a Far better job than I could have done, and I encourage you to keep creating pieces as fine and thoughtful as this one!

~Windresss www.wrathoftherunt.com

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