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Sawyer dyes his hair.
Sawyer dyes his hair. by @Fifth (Fifth Stage Erikson)

He does. Check it out. Brown vs. Black. Shame on him.

My character Sawyer. He is a pooka, which I'd explain here only I'm not going to. He normally wears a great big coat, a scarf, and stripey sleeves, but I wanted to draw a tummy, and I did. Unfortunately his chest looks like poop.

EDIT: Now teen rated cos I remembered he has pubic hair showing and his fly is open. Whoopsie.

Hey look, I'm alive and my computer (new computer, mm) works now. So like. Update flood, coming your way.

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Teen (O)
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Rough / Concept
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19y319d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 25 December, 2004 @ 11:19 PM

Nice. Very nice. I do like male stomachs, and his chest is not half-bad. I really love the style of this image, the sketchy lines and shading are really, really cool, and I love his expression. He really is an adorable character, if by adorable you can mean really hot with a cute face. Which I do. The arm is also pretty darned good, which I remember you had an issue with in your last picture, and again I commend you for knowing how to draw hands. Also, I like how you don't just depend on lineart for imagery--your shading also gives the character a good sense of prescence. Okay. Forgive the weird comments I'm leaving, I had a little Guiness tonight and it's messing with my head. Not that you needed to know that. But I felt I should apologise anyways. :) And I wanted to comment and let you know I really like your art, and congrats on the new computer!

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