@Lucky_Ladybug66
Daisy Hunt
XD I finished Life After the Tears the other day, and it ended with Dartz meeting Alexander. Things have been changed from the original concept, though, and now they meet at the rubble of the Orichalcos temple instead of in an office. The temple was rebuilt by Doom Reborn, but collapsed during a storm when lightning mixed with a Seal of Orichalcos. Dartz (dueling a Doom Reborn operative) barely escaped with his life, and then he met the strange, wounded creature that fell from the sky.
I love Dartz's expression here. XD He looks so weary and put out. And I think his hair looks quite nicely fluffy. ^^
Alexander: You set me free!
Dartz: ... Oh lucky me. -.-
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Thanks for the critique. ^^ Alexander's wing is just kinda hanging down. A lot of it would be off the edge of the picture. XD It was a troublesome thing to draw, though, and I imagine I could have done it better. ^^;
I'm still learning about folds. :) I'll experiment with them some more and hopefully get some that are realistic-looking.
Wow! The faces and the hair is awesome! especially Dartz's hair, its very good and flowing, i like that, the wing is drawn fairly well, but it doesn't look like a natural fold, maybe you could find wing tutorials but it doesn't look very realistic, but i can't draw wings well either so i can't really help you with that one, sorry. The rips in the clothes are done well, maybe you could add a few folds where the pants are where his body sits, so it doesn't make his legs look like they are rubber, but other than those few touches i think you've done a very nice job! Keep it up!