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Elazul Jumi

Snow
Snow by @Laprislazulknight88 (Elazul Jumi)

I really don't like this picture. ._.

Hmm, I sketched it ... she had a torso at one time. O_o

But I cropped it a whole bunch and then edited it on Photoshop, traced a copy and then colored.

Oi, I don't liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike it. ;_;

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Posted: Monday, 19 July, 2004 @ 02:25 AM
I love compositions like this : ) (I actually drew somthing SLIGHTLY similar last winter it's here if you're interested *shrug*)

Anyway, I love the cool color scheme. It's quite befitting of the mood :)

You might be more happy with this if you messed with the inks a bit. If I was you, I'd taper the ends of the lines a little with the erasor tool, and make her eyelashes a lighter color. I might also get rid of the shadow under the signature..its a bit distracting.

Really though, beautiful drawing, nice color scheme, great composition :). As is, I'd be proud of it.

Posted: Monday, 19 July, 2004 @ 09:06 AM

Hmm, you're right! :D

That's a good idea ... if I have any extra time I'll definatly do that ... but I think that I sort of slacked off with this picture because I didn't think it was going to turn out very good.

Thank you! ^^

Posted: Friday, 06 August, 2004 @ 12:28 AM

The color really does help give that dull feeling winter always brings.

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