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Nikki Jeske

Flying...
Flying... by @moonchild (Nikki Jeske)

My first try with real water colors (well not REAL water colors...) and I think it turned out okay. The poem was just a thrown in at the last minute when I was cropping it. Anyways...I like. Those little creatures with wings have been popping up all over my sketchbook so I though I should at least draw a decent one. Cool.

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Posted: Tuesday, 08 January, 2002 @ 05:39 PM

See? You're not so bad with watercolors... It just needs a bit more shading, that's all. It seems nice and somewhat symbolic to me...

I like the poem, too. Nice touch. =^^= Keep up the great work, eh Nikki?

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