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Gina Starwell

Leafthal
Leafthal by @Shelpup (Gina Starwell)

This is my first anthro luppess Leafthal. She's a proffesional Pikesman in Polearm (a martial art used with a staff or rod).

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20y295d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 17 January, 2004 @ 10:11 PM

First, I love the coloring... very simplistic.. but with detials.. interesting. I like the proportions.. well done. The face is fantastic so are the hands and the blade. her hips are great looking. The only thing that cuaght my eye in a bad way was that the white wrap around her middle seems unshaded. i also think that if you did a shadow of the blade on her body it might pop it out a bit more.. and i love her ears :)

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