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Sinead Sheehan

Alvis
Alvis by @taibhse (Sinead Sheehan)

This is Alvis from Last Exile, she was my first attempt at drawing a little girl and coloring with my mouse on the computer (after a few long periods of not drawing at all, period). Despite it being fairly old, I am fairly proud of it!

Duration of Drawing: 1 hour Coloring: 1.5 hours Medium(s): Pencil, Computer coloring

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20y66d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 23 September, 2004 @ 10:42 AM

She is so cute. I really love the childlike pose you've chosen--it suits her so well. I love the goat plushy! It looks like it's peering around her shoulder, and the way she's hugging it so protectively is really a great detail. Her eyes are very cute and innocent... her expression is somewhat reproachful, though. I wonder what she's thinking?

The coloring is decent, though you shouldn't be afraid to extend your shadows further into bigger areas. Shadows don't just occur underneath things--they make things round, and three dimensional, as well. So try some simple observation and I know you'll get better.

Overall this is a very, very cute pic. Keep up the great work!

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