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Katrien van Riet

Fay
Fay by @Namari (Katrien van Riet)

I finished her. The hair is messed up, but I know it would be. Comments would be very much appreciated.

Charcoal. 4 hours.

Category:
Humanoid
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Everyone
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Finished Work
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20y125d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 25 July, 2004 @ 07:12 PM
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Nice job on the shading! You did an excellent job on her lips and eyes. Her nose looks good as well. I don't think the hair looks bad at all!

The only thing that bothers me is the shape of her face. It seems too narrow. If you look at people, their face doesn't slant so sharply inward.

Nice job overall! You work well with charcoal. =)

Posted: Monday, 26 July, 2004 @ 04:46 AM
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Thanks. Yeah, The face is a bit weird. But if you saw the original you would have screamed. So I had to change it, I'm not really that good at changing people's faces realisticly. Anywho, thanks for the comment. I'll memember that for future drawings. goes to look at your gallery

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