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Ryzndrell - Line Art
Ryzndrell - Line Art by @Alleya (Alleluia Eyrie)

Julie Sal is the person whose character this is - Ryzndrell (and I may not be spelling that correctly, mind you) is a half-human, half-deer who carries a huge spear. Needless to say, the vines took me for-freaking-ever, and the feathers were no piece of cake either.

This was done entirely on my shiny tablet computer which I love, and gave me some fairly annoying neck pains. ^^ I'm hoping that I can get a palette from Julie and color her, but until I do, she will remain as is. And yes, her arm looks kind of stiff and horrid, and yes, she is probably too thin, and yes, those are not the only things wrong with her. But I like her anyway.

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Posted: Saturday, 27 January, 2007 @ 04:59 PM

I love the detail you've put into the spear; it looks amazing. Well worth the effort ^-^

The deer half looks a little large, and is a bit distracting, but the shape of the hair helps to balance it out a little, I think. It all looks great, though ^-^

Posted: Saturday, 27 January, 2007 @ 05:04 PM

^^ I'm glad - I spent forever on that thing.

Hmm. Yeah, I see what you mean. I'll try to resize it a little before I color it. (I'm bad with animals in general - when I first drew it, I was too happy that it looked like a deer at all to actually look at it. ^-^)

Posted: Saturday, 27 January, 2007 @ 05:07 PM

The shape is quite nice, it just doesn't look quite in proportion to the rest of it. Even resizing it a little will, I think, help a lot ^-^ I'd love to see it coloured.

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