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Desirae Gundry

A time ticks on...
A time ticks on... by @desigund (Desirae Gundry)

Uh, Help! Okay, I just want to know if anyone sees any glaring errors on this. The guidence conselor asked me to do the cover of the literary magazine that goes out each year. I likes this. And she's holding MICE! Their names are Lunch, Food and Snack.

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Posted: Friday, 11 January, 2002 @ 12:42 AM
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Hm, looks good to me. I like the concept and pose. Her legs (esp. where her feet are) are a bit confusing, but I don't think anyone's going to really notice.

Very nice picture!

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Posted: Wednesday, 16 January, 2002 @ 12:36 PM
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I hope your counslor picks this to put on the cover!!! What a good pic....wish I could see one mouse scrambling somewhere......Ciao, Me

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Posted: Wednesday, 16 January, 2002 @ 01:05 PM
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What? ... that so did not just happen. stares blankly at her mom.

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Posted: Friday, 05 April, 2002 @ 04:29 PM
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You are so talented, and this piece would be great for our lit mag. Credit yourself more, you deserve it.

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