Well, ok, first things first, being your best friend and all. Her hair and profile could be darker, like her eye is.switches out of constructive comment mode I love it! Gauh, that is such a chilling poem! I have to sy you're right. Burned villages,unexpected children,toughing it out after that. It's all been done before (That's why I threw a mad genetic scientist and all that wonderful stuff into Cassidy's background. Spices things up a bit more, don't it? Anyhoo, now that you'e thrown out the challenge, I'd better get to work on something equally to depressing, my Death poem. OUy!
Broken by @Xalan (Xalan Sourkrat)
After reading farrrrrr too many fictions where the 'mary-sue's village had brunt down, been raped(not a luaghing matter, but after it being done so poorly, and so often...blah) been beaten, and various other, I just had to do something to vent. and thus, Marran Dragonsbane, the charcter I've probably been the most evil to, popped out and said this little thing. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Xalan Sourkrat
O_O Gak. Awesome drawing! And I agree completely. Even many best-seller books, claimed to be wonderful and such... Just about all the main characters go through the so-called "hardships," and have a total of squat downsides, disadvantages, or things that they're not good at. ::sigh::