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Elazul Jumi

Gun-Like-Thing
Gun-Like-Thing by @Laprislazulknight88 (Elazul Jumi)

Drawn with pencil, inked, and then horribly colored with Photoshop. It's Elizabeth in one of my stories ... Man, that's a very sad attempt at a gun. XD

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Posted: Thursday, 17 June, 2004 @ 01:34 AM

hehe... I have a lot of gun troubles too. x_x'

First off... I'm really digging that jacket, I like the way her hair kind of drapes around the collar. Nice job in dressing her, in general, actually, I like the choice of clothes. Secondly, I like the way you colored it; looks nice and simplistic, with no overloading detail, which is a nice approach to take... the color of her clothes really goes with the background, it's got a nice monotone look that pulls it all together. The color choice helps her skintone and hair really stand out; all in all, it's a damn good color scheme.

Thirdly, that's a pretty good pose. Like the slouch -- badittude! xD

Posted: Thursday, 17 June, 2004 @ 12:11 PM

Wow! Thank you so much!!

The original picture (that featured a guy) ahd the same sort of jacket but I didn't want to draw all the buckles so I made it pretty simple.

... Er ... I'm still horrible with Photoshop so it's really my inexperience that explains my lack of a background ... but I prefer simple stuff anyway unless it's a painting or something.

Thank you so much!! (again)

Posted: Thursday, 17 June, 2004 @ 06:48 AM

Good job. I love the use of texture on her long sleeves, it really creates a nice contrast. The gun itself is not so bad, I just think the way the fingers hold it could be improved. The hair is wonderfully done, especially the fall of it. Looks perfect for the mood of the painting. You really pulled everything together well.

Posted: Thursday, 17 June, 2004 @ 12:12 PM

Yes, I don't like the fingers much either ... it was only until after I colored it did I realize they didn't look that good at all ... but then again ... you can't really go back on inking too much.

Thank you!!

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