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One of Those Days
One of Those Days by @Elleree (Elleree Phoenix)

Well, I finally got my computer back from the people who were fixing it, so in celebration I decided to upload this pic. I was having a bad day, so I drew this. Tis my first try at drawing rain, so i'm not so sure it's very good. Any suggestions/comments would be appreciated.

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Posted: Tuesday, 31 May, 2005 @ 05:29 PM

Great pic. I especially noticed the detail you put into this pic, especially on the wood (which you did an excellent job on, btw) I also notice how her hair hangs down, giving the impression thats its wet. Great details! The rain, also ,looks ok. To make it more realistic, try making lots of lighter strokes:)

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