So pretty! I love her face and hair and the dress design is lovely. Personally I think the trim is enough detailing, no pattern needed.

She's so CUTE! I love catgirls, and I love the loligoth style you have her in! The curls are too precious, but my favorite part is her eyes. They're just so catty and mischevious! The lace is pretty nicely drawn. I like how it has a definite pattern. As for the dress, on the outer skirts, I'd put a large pattern, like they kind you see on fancy curtains or sofas, in two colors, like red and darker red, and leave the rest plain. This is such a cute image, you really should color it! A finished one would be awesome!