This image is really cute! I really love the colors you used. They are so pretty, and give the image such a soft texture. Ir eally love the dog's fur, in particular. The composition is very cool, I like how they are all looking different directions. It gives them all different personalities. The character looking at us has amazingly expressive eyes, too. You are really good at oekaki!

Nice work. The faces are nicely rendered, particularly that cute dog's face. The hair also falls very naturally and is shaded well. Interesting characters here. The shading on the dog could be improved a little, and the boy's chin is a little lopsided on the right side, but otherwise it's good.