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Antoni hero 1
Antoni hero 1 by @HereticNinja

So what is going on exactly? Antoni going through a labyrinth without the aid of Ka Sarra instead he is teamed up with someone else fighting off some of the local nasties. Well indeed Antoni is on his own at first then he comes across a mouse tribe who believes in a prophecy that an outside hero will show up and undergo through some tribulations that will ultimately lead that person to becoming a hero for the tribe and help liberate them from their prison. That person would also windup starting a path to becoming a Hero of Light, then finally becoming a Hero of The Light. The tribe however does not think Antoni is that person, but one fellow named 'Murziat' thinks that Antoni can can be a another key to their salvation and aids him along the way in hopes he can persuade Antoni into helping his tribe. Managing to achieve his goal and finding his final armor set Antoni helps Murziat after much peril to obtain Antoni's prize he felt that at least he should try. Antoni undertakes the quest and travels through dimensions where he fulfills the tribe's prophecy becoming both the Hero of Light and the Hero of The Light ( with gear that makes him excessively overpowered which he can't use in his regular dimension but outside of it). When he travels back to his realm he aids Murziat's tribe unaware that he also has placed himself in a position where other parties pay closer attention to him as he continues to search for artifacts and other relics with Ka Sarra and their continual battle fighting the never ending scourge of Haunts. At the sometime Antoni is enduring those trials, Ka Sarra is outside of the labyrinth with instructions not to intervene in Antoni's quest. Naturally being upset at this restriction she does comply with it and is undoubtedly kicking rocks out of frustration as she walks to and fro. Luckily for Ka Sarra they will both have other opportunities to go through the labyrinth together.


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Posted: Thursday, 07 September, 2023 @ 10:54 AM

Outstanding work sir.

Posted: Thursday, 07 September, 2023 @ 12:05 PM

@The-Wizard-of-Zaar: Thank you much, glad you like it.

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