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Abigail Oliver

The Future of the Jade Castle
The Future of the Jade Castle by @Cacopheny (Abigail Oliver)

Meet the future of the Jade Queendom. From left to right, Lao and Alta (his daemon), Selerots, Briana, Risa, Nate, Kalery, and Rowan. I wanted to add Cylene but I ran out of room.

I could be more pleased with this pic... Risa looks funny, Sel looks funny, Bri isn't as pretty as she's supposed to be, and Rowan's positioning is a little odd (though he is supposed to be kind of upside down). But I love Kal's expressoin and Lao is just plain cute.

But the border turned out awful! My second attempt at a markered border and it looks shoddy. None of the lines are straight, the colors are wrong, and they're inconsistent. Sorry, Rach, but my pink marker looks more orange than pink so I had to go more red to compensate...

But at least it's finally done. ::sheepish grin:: Hope ever'body likes it.

Sel, Risa, and Bri belong to Christy-chan, to whom this pic be dedicated (love ya, hun!). Kalery belongs to Rachel-chan, to whom I owe a bunch of color-info (specifically the bottom border). Nate belongs to Dale, and Rowan and Lao are mine.

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Posted: Thursday, 14 February, 2002 @ 07:35 PM
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Well I likes it so XP!!!!! I love the way you draw your people soooo much...

+_@< Fuba

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Posted: Monday, 18 February, 2002 @ 10:43 AM
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Oooo, chica... wow, you got everyone in there! :) I love Kal's expression, too, it's cute. :) And Rowan's angle... well, yeah, it's hard to draw, and I don't know if there would be any way to have it not be 'odd.'

Sel's hair looks a little odd to me, and he might be a bit too broad, but that's really the only thing I'd worry about with him as I look at the pic more.

Bri's hair is sooo pretty, tho! :) I love it. :) And the shape of her eyes, too.

Risa's clothes are such pretty colors, too, and exactly something she would wear. :) The only thing I can even guess at being 'wrong' with her is the way she's looking down at Nate?

And Lao is such a cutie! Hand dangled over the border and all. ^-^

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Posted: Saturday, 23 February, 2002 @ 01:13 AM
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so cute! you draw hands so well....

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