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Oribit Ocelot pg5
Oribit Ocelot pg5 by @Treager (Lunari Natsume)

This is page 5 of "Orbit Ocelot". I really LOVED drawing this comic, and I just wish that I could have done more! Artwork © Copyright 2002 Jace Forste

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Posted: Thursday, 09 May, 2002 @ 01:50 PM

I give it two thumbs up for creative nipple barriers! LOL! This comic looks great, you've got something good going here. But it needs text!

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