Swinging by @sakama (Sakkaku Amano)
I was going to color this, but it ended up being too detailed, and I usually have a very specific idea of what I want to CG. I kinda thought the idea for this was unoriginal.
@sakama
Sakkaku Amano
I think this picture (girl on a swing) would turn out more original with an unusual or surreal background -- like a space scene, or even an underwater scene.
I love the quality of your pencil lines, especially in her jacket! Great job with the folds!!
Some nitpicks: the arm and hand nearest us looks flat, and her facial features are misalligned. Also, the foot nearest us looks twisted too much our way...I think we'd see more of the side of the shoe, and less of the bottom of it.
But...I like the structure of her leg...sturdy, man. I need to practice more with structure.
Nice job! It'd be neat to see what you do with this (if anything).
my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill