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Marik Stretching
Marik Stretching by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

XD I wasn't sure if I was gonna draw him stretching or being chained up, but I finally decided that his expression was too passive for him to be chained up. So he's having a good stretch and apparently someone is watching him. Someone possibly unwelcome, from Marik's expression. XD I'm really proud of how his body went. I know the left hand looks a bit odd, but other than that I think it's quite good. ^_^

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Posted: Tuesday, 13 July, 2004 @ 12:01 AM

OR! He's held up by invisible chains, captive of an atrocious Mary-Sue determined to keep him her captive until he falls hopelessly in love with her original character! And he's less than worried, because he knows that Sues are harmless, though annoying.

...or maybe I've just had too much sugar this evening...

The positioning and proportions are very nice on this one. And his hand doesn't look that weird...his thumb's just in the wrong place ^^; For his fingers to be in front while gripping his arm, his thumb would have to be above his fingers...

Nice detail on the chains on his shirt, and his belt really stands out to me, for some reason...

Posted: Wednesday, 14 July, 2004 @ 05:52 AM

Oh that's too priceless. XD Down with Mary-Sues!

Thanx for helping me figure out the exact problem with the hand. ^__^ I couldn't quite make sense of it at all, just that I knew it didn't look right!

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