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Cannot Fly on Wings Broken by Sorrow
Cannot Fly on Wings Broken by Sorrow by @Dalamar (Blue Deyeu)

Yes, the title is wordy, but anything less makes the picture cheap. -.-

No background to this, except I was very, very sad when I drew it...'lay down and weep- sad. So I drew this, my artistic manifestation of myself, broken and beaten, and then I lay down and sniffled into a pillow for a while. T.T

A) I really hate dealing with the 'lie,' 'lay,' and 'laid' gramer crap...bleargh. 2) I should be an angsty Goth poet...o.o I've got melodramatic skills.

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Teen (VO)
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20y152d ago
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