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Tonee Slater

Haku
Haku by @Tonee (Tonee Slater)

I drew this one on 2002.12.05 after school. It was originally done in pencil and was then inked over. I left in some of the pencil marks to kind of show my work on it, but when it was scanned, the 'intelligent scanning' features turned it into a black and white image so my pencil marks are gone.. which will also make it difficult to CG because I had pencil marks where I wanted a change in the shading.. =\ At least this time my scanner didn't cut anything off.

As for the actual artwork, I messed up on his shirt a little. Down near the bottom you will notice one of the lines isn't as straight as it should be. I also had a little trouble with the hair on his right (your left.) You'll notice his hair curves around his head more sharply on his right (your left) than on the other side. This was originally not a problem, but the hair seemed to stick out from the head too much, so I curved it more and the hair looked at least a little more natural. Although after I inked it, I realised the curve doesn't match very well with the curve on the other side of his head. Oh well.

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