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"Wake Up, Dad! Please Wake Up!" by @cinda7 (Cinda 7)

This picture depresses me. When the scientists came to Raven's home, everyone ran in fear. Just as one scientist was about to capture Raven, her father came in with his spear and tried to fight the human off. Unfortunatly, humans carry guns. A man hiding in the bushes got out his gun and shot Raven's dad. He didn't make it. Raven was then taken onto the ship and taken to Earth to their impending doom. As they were taken to the labs, the only thing Raven and her mother could think about was Raven's dad and how they were glad that he wasn't around to suffer the wrath of the scientists. I know that's really sad, but that's jes what happened to Raven. I think it helped with her insanity. I think I'm going to write a story about it, but who knows how long it will be until I finish it. I'm already working on like... 10 other stories. So dun get your hopes up. Sooooooo.... lazzzzzzzyyyyyyyyyyyy...... Artwork © Copyright 2003 Cinda 7

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Posted: Friday, 14 February, 2003 @ 06:13 AM

Aww...this is a GREAT picture Cinda... Sure it's sad...But the emotions are expressed...VERY well...I can actually feel the "drama" or wotever going on here...VEEDDDYYY gewd, cookie for yoo! :B peg

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