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The Wizard Of Zaar

Where's Yusi?
Where's Yusi? by @The-Wizard-of-Zaar (The Wizard Of Zaar)

One night, Esti had a nightmare.

Yusi was gone, and her other friends were different.

They were wicked and gleeful, and something vast loomed above them all.

It made her dizzy and hurt her head to look at it or think about it.

She felt rigid and dusty, as if she were made of clay.

She saw a side of Darim she already knew of, but he still went to lengths to hide it.

She saw something in Yanta that was different and frightening, and another thing she hopes even when she is awake, isn't true.

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