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Vanessa Ho

Grey (2)
Grey (2) by @MOCHI (Vanessa Ho)

Decided to give it a more finished look from my prev grey night picture.

Critz and Comments are welcome~ =)

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Rating:
Teen (D)
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Finished Work
Submitted:
19y197d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 28 April, 2005 @ 08:46 AM

I wonder why people do not comment on your work, because I for one love you art! Anyways.... Again the color of the piece does help depict a more somber feeling. The greyness of his skin really depicts him as a kind of emotionless character or perhaps a depressed one. Leaning more towards the emotionless from the hair covering his one eye, since it projects a sense of unfeeling. But anyways, I really like how he does seem to have a personality through the subtle use of color and position.

Posted: Thursday, 28 April, 2005 @ 07:56 PM

yayyy thanks so much nolani~ <3 <3 <3 thanks for the encouragment!! =D

You obviously understand my art well!! lol 'emotionaless' is definitely something i wanted the picture to give off~ XD thankyou so much! <3

I guess the use of greyness isn't bad o.o adds to the mood eh. ^^ thnx!

Posted: Tuesday, 29 November, 2005 @ 09:52 PM

Had a lil time spear and thought id look through ur gallery once more when this guy caught my eye. Again, its very well drawn so im gonna be critical :c P

The colours on this are ace, all working together to give a relaxed feeling in a personal space. The colourin for the hair is floorless. His pose is not an easy one but u did a good job.

The things i notice are a tiny bit odd is his back isnt as rounded as i feel it shld be, a kinda lump is just under the shoulder. i think roundin off that lil corner might fix that but u get away with is coz his top is baggy. I recon the hair on his right side of his face cld be a lil longer to give a better reason for not being able to see his right eye. Both of those are very minor and only visible if u really look but what does stick out is his vanishing arm. i really recon this lad needs the rest of his right arm hanging between his legs coz its not at the right angle to go over his left knee and to far 4ward to be hidden by the right leg so u shld be able to see his wrist and hand.

If i had made this pic i wld most likely fix these lil problems if i had the time coz this picture really is very very good. Fixing the glitches wld make it go pro ;c )

Looking 4ward to ur next upload

Munky

Posted: Wednesday, 30 November, 2005 @ 12:11 AM

Wow Thanks so much for such a high quality crit! =D

To be honest, this is an old piece and I remember it being a rough work (but realised I classified it as a finished image). I completely understand about the eyes and arm, it bugged me when i drew this, but I'm a lazy one and just hoped it was ignored hahahaha

I totally agree with the rounding of the back, I found it difficult to be honest, back then I couldn't find the correct angle of the arch - a problem with only one solution which is to practice lol

Again, THANKYOU SO MUCH! XD

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