@Namari
Katrien van Riet

Unicorn Painted
Unicorn Painted by @Namari (Katrien van Riet)

I know it's crappy but it's my first painting ever (not counting the crappy ones in kindergarten and primary school.)

I had reference from a photo.

Comments would be great. hint hint

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Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 12:09 PM

it's a nice painting and i like how u've shaded here and there... but, the unicorn looks kinda fat, no offence :P.. maybe u should have made him more slende kinda? :-/

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 12:12 PM

slender* sorry :P

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 01:28 PM

I know he's kind of fat, but I used photoreference and he looked like that on the photo and I liked it. Thanks for the comment though! :)

Posted: Thursday, 19 August, 2004 @ 02:10 PM

That's way better than my first painting, photo ref or not. :P I like the texture of the brushstrokes a lot - it sort of reminds me of Impressionism. I think if you used the same brush technique only with a lot more paint, it would give the painting sort of a richer look to it. Unless i'm retarded and this is watercolor, in which case that idea just wouldn't work. ^^;

It looks good! I like it :D

Posted: Friday, 20 August, 2004 @ 05:46 AM

Thanks. You're not retarded, I used acrylics but I don't have any white, (it's gone all crumbly) so I had to paint just the shadows. I'll get some white one of these days I hope. crosses fingers :)

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