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Sara Nelson

Luna Refrence
Luna Refrence by @saranels (Sara Nelson)

If anyone wants to do a fanart for me, this is the pic to look at.

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Posted: Saturday, 15 December, 2001 @ 07:13 PM

Reference pictures are always a good idea. ^^ She looks a bit topheavy, though. o.O I'd suggest making the rib-cage shallower and maybe shortening the neck a bit. That last is optional, though, depending on how humanoid you want her to look. Otherwise it looks like you really planned her out carefully. The leaning-forward posture is a good touch and probably makes sense given the structure of the legs.

http://www.side7.com/art/aletmart/

Posted: Saturday, 15 December, 2001 @ 07:13 PM

Reference pictures are always a good idea. ^^ She looks a bit topheavy, though. o.O I'd suggest making the rib-cage shallower and maybe shortening the neck a bit. That last is optional, though, depending on how humanoid you want her to look. Otherwise it looks like you really planned her out carefully. The leaning-forward posture is a good touch and probably makes sense given the structure of the legs.

http://www.side7.com/art/aletmart/

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