Well, dragons are such subjective creatures, and eveyone sees them a bit differently. That said, I think your dragon is rather pretty. ^_^ I can't find much wrong with it artistically. One thing, though, is that the body looks kind of like it suddenly thinned and turned a sharp corner in the part just behind and visually beneath the head. That really is a pretty nice dragon style.
Moonlight by @bunnywunny (Bunny Wunny)
Oo yeah, the dragon is drawn REALLY bad here. ^^;; I don't draw dragons obviously. ^^;; I guess I could if I had some reference. XD This was inspired by spirted away~! Beautiful movie. ^.^/!
yeah you're right that is poorly drawn dragon