That's very good. I always like to see pencil touch in anime sketches, since it contrasts so well with the kind of bold highlights you normally see. You did a very nice job capturing Vash's cute smile, and pretty well on the glasses. However, the proportions of his eyes are off. Using guidelines stretched across the face really helps, but if you intend ot leave it as a pencil drawing, they can be hard to erase. I still recommend using them, however, until you can get eyes evenly sized without them.

I am truly impressed with the nose. I just have to add that. That is one of the best noses I've seen for a long time. :) For your next sketch, add some more shading--but I think it would be cool if you didn't try to make it too bold or cel-style, I like the light pencil touch you have and I'd like to see you make use of it!

AHHH!!! i loves it! its sssssoooooooooo good! :D

That's really good, especially the hair hanging over Vash's face. I like the contrast as well. You have some real talent. =)

This is excelent. I love how you did the eyes, though they are kinda big and feminin-looking. I've never seen anybody pull the hair off quite as nicely as you have. The sunglasses came out great, too. All in all, this rocks.

OMG! CUTE! I love it! huggles

this picture is awsome! i have had it on my com backround for 2 months now wich is longer than i normaly ceep . ^_^

very very nice! it almost looks like harry potter gone punk! yeay and cudos on the eyes!