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Yaminah Tashanazi

Trio doodle
Trio doodle by @chaosmage (Yaminah Tashanazi)

Three versions of the same doodle I did on the tablet.

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Rough / Concept
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19y118d ago
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Posted: Friday, 15 July, 2005 @ 06:04 PM

Beautiful! You have such a soft touch with the tablet. All the lines are so gentle looking, as well as the color. Her pose is wonderful too. It makes her so much more dynamic and interesting.

Posted: Monday, 18 July, 2005 @ 09:51 AM

Wow. I love seeing the various versions of this picture. And the way you deliberately colored it a bit outside the lines is neat. It only works well in some styles, this being one of them. doesn't think it looks particularly attractive when used in cartoons such as Jackie Chan. XD; But you pulled it off well. ^^

I like the way she looks like she's leaning backward/falling.

Posted: Monday, 18 July, 2005 @ 11:57 PM

^^ I couldn't decide which I liked better, so I put them all together.

Yeah, she's leaning backwards. It's another one of those pics that's supposed to be in motion. I was originall gonna have her leaning back against a rail, but changed my mind.

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