Janna Fong

Out of Character
Out of Character by Janna Fong (@jfong)

Joshua's character is nothing like this, but I really liked the pose. XP Anyway, I was playing around with perspective after seeing a frame from Hajime no Ippo (manga). It's similar to this except that instead of standing, the character is sitting on the wall. I know there are a ton of errors in this. XP

Drawn in Painter Colored in Photoshop

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18 years and 226 days ago
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Comments & Critiques (2)

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Posted: Monday, 23 August, 2004 @ 03:55 AM

Frankly, i don't really see the errors that you are speaking of. All the proportions are correct, the pose is really great, one of the better slouching poses i've seen, and your coloring is really good once again. As i've said b4, the jeans, the black ones this time, look like a pair that i've got, lol. I think the scuffs on the shoe is a really nice touch. Only thing that i would say, is that the wall could use a little bit more detail, and be a little less blurry. really good job, even if it doesn't match the character...... besides, everybody has to get bored and frustrated some time right? XP

Sincerely, Ikaika

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