@Windresss
Lacy Cotton

Girl in Anime Style
Girl in Anime Style by @Windresss (Lacy Cotton)

I was playing around with the Anime Style and drew this. I like the hair, but there's still something about her that seems a little man-ish. Hmm...

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20y278d ago
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Posted: Friday, 06 February, 2004 @ 04:39 PM

It is pretty good too me. She doesn't look man-ish. Keep it up! :)

Posted: Saturday, 07 February, 2004 @ 12:24 AM

Very nice sketch. I really like the almost realistic-anime style of it. What might make her seem 'mannish' could possibly be her cheekbones. Her jawline seems a bit square. In anime, generally female characters have very pointy chins, and the curve down starts just under the eyes. Here, she has actual realistic cheekbones and cheeks. I think if you made that line less curvy and more angular, it might eliminate the 'manliness' you are seeing.

Personally, though, I think she looks fine. But that was the only thing I could point out that might be causing the problem you mentioned!

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