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Marron vs. Vegeta
Marron vs. Vegeta by @theacrit (Thea Critza)

YAY! This is manga #1 of mine and my bff Freddie's manga series, 'The Adventures of Chibi Marron'. The next one to come will be Marron vs. Cell, then Marron vs. Mr. Satan. I KNOW there is no such thing as 'kawaii power' and that, in DBZ reality, Vegeta could beat Marron if he wanted to. But this manga was for fun, and not made to be as real as possible. The words are kinda hard to read, but it was my first try making a manga, so deal with it. If you seriously can't read it and desperately want to know what it says, email me^_^ Artwork © Copyright 2002 Thea Critza

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Posted: Thursday, 04 April, 2002 @ 08:12 PM

lol, funny! You might not want to have the fadeing background on the text boxes next time. It makes it a little hard to read.

Posted: Saturday, 06 July, 2002 @ 05:12 AM

LOL!!!! ROFL!!!! LMAO!!!!!! cute!!!!!!

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