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Silence.... But Broken
Silence.... But Broken by @melpank (Mel Panknin)

Jesus, this took a lot out of me, emotionally, and otherwise. Stemmed from a few years back, when I told some "friends" I was thinking about suicide and they laughed. And thought the bandages on my wrists were fake, and clotted with fake blood. Text is also at http://www.eyeballcity.com/Truth.txt Chris McAdderly and the words are © by me. If I find that reprinted without permission, I will put someone's butt in a sling.

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Posted: Wednesday, 13 February, 2002 @ 06:34 AM

Damn. That's good. I may seem to be a bit shall with my work, but I'm young, and it's pretty cruel to be judged. I like your style a lot. I've had times when I feel like that...not as serioues but close enough...like I'm...trapped... Great Work, love Ikobe (Sophia P. Cope)

Posted: Wednesday, 09 October, 2002 @ 01:10 PM

Hello. Just wanted to let you know that I loved this image and the words. They were very well put. I know someone who is having similar feelings and I am trying to help her out. Tell those friends of yours that they are crap...Side 7 does not allow profanity tell them they are...urm.. mean. (If it were me I would use more colorful words) They have no right to laugh at you.

Posted: Friday, 21 February, 2003 @ 12:10 AM

shakes head They're not truly your friends. No friend should ever laugh at somehting like that. The pic seems so... forsaken. I realize that you drew it a while ago; I hope you feel more appreciated now.

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