First off, I'd like to say, that i luv ffx, and kimahri is also one of my fav. char. Ur drawing of the face is very good, but the torso could be thickened up a little bit. Also, the torso seem to be at too much of an angle, but that is probably because it is too thin on the right side. Good job.
Sincerely, Ikaika
Botch him up? No way. You are obviously very skilled at drawing animals. He looks exactly the way he does in the game, he just needs some colour. Very nice for a rough drawing.