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Sakura H

endless sunset over the ocean
endless sunset over the ocean by @Lucifel (Sakura H)

painted with Watercolor and might be crappy....its a boundless border outstretched beyond land and into water....let the fiery cool colors of the sunset fill the sky with its creation....and capture it and embed it into an endless sleep of darkness.

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Posted: Saturday, 09 April, 2005 @ 06:28 PM

By no means is this crappy. I really like how you brought the passage to life. The transition seems a little shakey though. Perhaps running the color a little more together would help. I love the contrast with the mountains.

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