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The Goblin King (colored)
The Goblin King (colored) by @Demented_Rabbit (demented rabbit)

Wanted to see how my skills at coloring on the computer was. Not bad but I've just noticed that some of the shading is too much or a little off. But that's me, my own critic.

~...Just as I can be so cruel.~

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20y50d ago
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Posted: Friday, 08 October, 2004 @ 03:59 PM

Nice! You did a very good job on the hair and the jacket, especially--it looks so shiny! The shading on the face is a little off, but I think that's because you've done the same thing I used to do. See, where the big white spot in the eye is--that indicates the direction the light is coming from. The way you've shaded makes the shadows seem to be coming from that direction, instead. Pay attention when you're coloring to the light in the eyes, kind of 'draw' imaginary lines of light going in that direction. Am I making sense? I dunno cause I'm slightly ill and rather dizzy. Oh well! Keep up the CGing, this is way better than my first attempt!

Posted: Tuesday, 12 October, 2004 @ 11:23 AM

Thanks. ^_^ Yeah, the shading's off but that was a while back, I try to see where the light is from now. Thank you for the tip. You're making sense don't worry!! lol

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