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Akiva Papa

Ein Neuer Tag
Ein Neuer Tag by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)
Text:
Ein neuer Tag glotzt
mir entgegen
Er baut sich auf
und stiert mich an
so tumb und blöd
wie alle seine Brüder
Er steht nur da
und nimmt
mir meine Sicht
Er ist die Feigheit
eines Wahns,
der Trugschluss
eines Lebens,
das draußen spielt,
und drin
bin ich gefangen

Er hält mich hier und zeigt sich bös wie eine Wand aus grauem Stahl

Ein Feind, der falsch so tut, als sei Freund und doch ist er es nicht Er lügt D A H I N T E R ist das Licht

ENGLISH VERSION

Another day is yawning and plants himself in front of me and gawks as dull as all his brothers did before

Just hanging around Blocking my sight

Coward of delusion Fallacy of life That plays the game outside but here I stay in prison

It has chained me here and shows its ugly face a wall of greyish steel An enemy in friend's disguise

But it is not true It's just a lie

B e y o n d you'll find the light

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Class:
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Submitted:
22y174d ago
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