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Akiva Papa

Abschied
Abschied by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)
Text:
Ich schmücke mich,
mein Liebster,
Doch du kommst nicht mehr
Ich eile dir entgegen,
doch du bist es nicht
Ich will dich umfassen,
doch meine Hände bleiben leer

ENGLISH VERSION: I've dressed up for you, my love But you won't come back. I've flown into your arms, my love, but it is not you I've longed to embrace you, my love, but my hands fail to hold you

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Submitted:
22y174d ago
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