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Erin Ruiz

Dying In Your Sin
Dying In Your Sin by @yami0204 (Erin Ruiz)

++++++++++ i thought you loved me but i was wrong i thought you cared but you didn't at all i thought we'd be together forever but you betrayed me and left me cold and lifeless on the floor

is that my crimson? is that your knife? why did you do it? why did you leave me cold and lifeless on the floor dying in your sin?

i'm ashamed to have ever loved you ++++++++++

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Teen (V)
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19y215d ago
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Posted: Friday, 05 November, 2004 @ 02:44 AM

niiiiice, nice poem AND art thingy.. it's alle very good, the blood, the floor, the hair, the font =P, coolage.. keep it up.. kinda sad theme though... but feelings create good art!

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