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Best Freinds
Best Freinds by @dragtear (Dragon Tear)

I wish i could draw better...ohh well! This was drawn over the summer, and so i have improved, i have just yet to get anythign new scanned. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Dragon Tear

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Posted: Tuesday, 30 December, 2003 @ 05:29 AM

Oh, that is so adorable, I love the dolphin's expression! ^^ The anatomy on both the dolphin and the fish are pretty good, but I do have some (hopefully) helpful critiques on the dolphin. One, his lower jaw is to short - with solphins, the lower jaw is actually just a tiny bit longer than the upper. Two, his tail isn't bending enough for the flukes, which should be perpendicular to the back, to be in a natural-looking position; they look like they're in a more fishlike, parallel with the back position. However, that's something that just about anyone who's ever drawn a cetacean has had trouble with - those flukes are really hard to get right no matter what the angle! Well, keep drawing! ^^ This is an adorable pic, as I said. ^_^

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