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Danielle Bertocci

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This is a little graphic design text collage assignment. Dis is referring to Hades. Just because. Done mostly by collage, but with some pencil and oil pastel in there.

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Teen (N)
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21y1d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 27 November, 2003 @ 07:54 PM

WOW! I'm so amazed at the materials you used here--I've never seen something like this on Side 7! It's truly amazing! The image was actually easier to distinguish in the thumbnail--there is just so much going on, my eyes get distracted. But I really love it. I just can't explain how cool this image is. Keep this up--collages are really cool!

Posted: Thursday, 27 November, 2003 @ 08:17 PM

i like it having worked in the past in collage and having done some grassroot papermaking (texture/ colour experimentation) i truly enjoy this medium you have done a good job on this one- your composition is quite strong- but i think you went BIG almost too big with some of your pieces- sure it gives you a real and/or slapped together look, but you might do more with smaller pieces... you really mastered the constructing part of the work- leaving corners up- almost looks like the pieces of paper have blown together by chance or miracle to form the picture... there are so many directions to go in this art form- could try with coloured text mixed in or make the text actually relate to the picture... try some more- you seem to have the knack

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