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Mutant Gal
Mutant Gal by @Alayna (Alayna Lemmer)

This is an original CG of mine, and I'm really proud. It's an X-men mutant that I made up.. I'm trying to get back to my comic book style roots. Here's my first attempt =] Please give me feedback!!!! Artwork © Copyright 2002 Alayna Lemmer

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Humanoid
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Posted: Wednesday, 02 October, 2002 @ 03:18 PM
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Wow that's really good! I like the background...you are really talented. And the girl is pretty... Keep up the good work P.S. how did you colour that it looks AWESOME

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Posted: Wednesday, 02 October, 2002 @ 03:23 PM
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Very nice! I love the 3D coloring effect! And the backround's great too. Well done!

Contructive criticism: Make the mouth and nose a little smaller, and the chest a little less saggy

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