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Squeakers (Aren't I creative?)
Squeakers (Aren't I creative?) by @Shizukashi (Damon Shizukashi)

Wow. Itsa mouse. Yep. If you comment on this.. Or.. Whatever. Please answer this question to the best of your ability.

Someday, mice will... A) Rule the world. B) Wear party hats. C) Make raids on Pikachu's house. D) Be made into crunchy treats for carnivores.

Oh wait. That last one is what mice are today, isn't it? My bad! Artwork © Copyright 2002 Damon Shizukashi

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Posted: Thursday, 21 February, 2002 @ 06:39 PM

I'm with number A XP

Posted: Thursday, 21 February, 2002 @ 06:40 PM

My first reaction was, "Aaw! It's so cute!" But I'm sure you already knew that. If you're the kind of person that looks for more helpful, possibly productive responses, well, I think the arms look a little too straight, but, seeing that it's a 'work in progress', I guess you'll fix that. Also, it looks more like a rat than a mouse, in my opinion. Perhaps that's because I own (and adore!) rats, or maybe because there's nothing to compare it's size to in the picture (and that's ok!). Who knows. I think you did a great job. (And to answer the multiple choice question about mouse, I pick C. :P)

Posted: Friday, 12 July, 2002 @ 03:40 AM

Heh. Thanks for all the feedback.. The reason the front foot is kinda.. blah.. is because it actually wasn't shown in the picture, because of the long grass. Also, it was in a small 'Animals of the world' guidebook thing.. The entire book couldn't have been more than 3 inches wide, 6 inches tall. And the photos aren't what I'd call the best. So I'll try to make up for that. Thanks again!

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