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Kipper... in Rithandren?
Kipper... in Rithandren? by @ras (B. F.)

Tee hee. I drew a Kipper-wah... sort of! Another flameperson I've drawn up as they'd fit into the Rithandren world. Drew and scanned this thing months ago, and only just got to colouring it, deciding for some reason to stay with the insanely dark and simplistic colouring stuffs.

Aroo.

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Posted: Saturday, 22 November, 2003 @ 12:32 PM

I really love her face--great expression, there. I think her near arm could be a little less stiff, but it does seem to work.

Darn--are you sure you don't want to add some backlighting to her, and a tad bit of shadow? It's REALLY take this one up another notch!

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