Thanks for your comment : ) And your ramblings absolutely do help!! :) I really should find this pic, ink it, and redo the coloring allogether--and you're absolutely right about the clothing, I'm really going to try to work on that :). Thank you so much for the comment!!
Lily by @mickimonkee (Micki Furuhata)
And yes, another friends character. This is Lily Hino. I dunno, tell me what I need to do please.
Ooo, I really like the lighting and shadows in this one. Her pose is well drawn, it looks quite fluid and natural. I like her expression too, though the blank eyes kinda creep me out, but they are neat. All that I might recommend is to try cleaning up your outlines a bit and to maybe experiment with fabric folds and the way that clothing hangs (I'm still struggling with that myself though). Also, you definitely show a knack for drawing hands. Hope my ramblings help ^_^