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1 The scene opens to the house of Rupert’s grandmother Rhonda and we see the child playing Trauma Jester on his computer, Todd then announces in the stream’s chat that he has purchased a Pammi plushie from Rose. Rhonda walks into the stream and Rupert promptly shows her his plushie, as the elderly woman talks about how tacky the plushie is Mark (a lanky fan who’s in the livestream’s chat) gets angry about the grandmother’s opinion. Mark decides to go to Rhonda’s house so he can teach her a lesson, the fan then proceeds to track the woman down. As Mark walks to Rhonda’s house we learn that Rupert has just completed the game’s “Gather the Ploinks” mission, Mark then arrives at the house and he sees Rhonda walking to the house’s balcony. Mark climbs to the balcony and he proceeds to confront the grandmother about her opinion on the Pammi plushie, Mark then starts shoving Rhonda near the edge of the balcony and as he begins this threaten the elderly woman she starts calling Rupert.

 

 

Rupert arrives at the balcony and as he sees what’s going on Mark successfully pushes Rhonda off of the balcony, as Rupert runs over to see how his grandmother is doing Mark runs into the woman’s house so he can escape through the front door. Rupert makes it to Rhonda and as he tries to pull her into the house the woman tells him that she isn’t going to make it, Rhonda then tells Rupert that she’ll always love him and afterwards she dies from her injuries. Rupert gets overwhelmed with emotion and as the Delta Force patrols another side of the neighborhood they hear Rupert’s anguished screams, the heroes then find Rhonda’s house and they spot Rupert hysterically crying on his grandmother’s corpse. The Delta Force asks Rupert what happened and they learn that a fan of the Trauma Jester franchise murdered his grandmother over a simple plushie, the murder then gets reported on the news and as the Delta Force goes to Terry in order to see what he thinks of the event they spot him preparing to commit suicide by jumping off of his apartment. Terry blames himself for what Mark did and Fluttershy reminds him that he didn’t directly cause Mark to murder Rhonda, as Kirby helps Terry off of the apartment the game designer proceeds to cry into the hero’s arms.


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